1. The differences in views, argument, gender, values, nationality or opinion make us special. At a young age this is also wrong most especially the word us and young age. 2. she highlighted young age and quite evident by the way we interact with our peers as awkward sentence 3. also the word Mankind is wrong in that sentence. it should be in the organization not people outside the organization and that’s why she also highlighted our difference and young age 4. But the question lies on the importance of human this sentence is also wrong because we are focusing the organization not outside the organization 5. When the conflicts are persistent it is impossible to work. this sentence is bad, according to the professor. the sentence sound more like a conversation than a technical writing 6. resume . “At the place of work, a person comes across different people with different views and values. It is the differences that will result in workplace conflict.” this is wrong. she said never start a sentence with a quotation. 7. finally she said, the introduction must be 1 page and half.